As she looked at me
My face brightened and I saw thousand suns rising into the sky,
A million roses blossomed around me,
Into an ocean of fragrance I fell,
As a realm of heaven, she stood before me,
With a wink of her eyelid,
She wiped all my sorrow
Into a world so delightful
She pushed me..........
She spread her wings wide apart
The spark in her eyes I took pleasure in
She then flew so high
Far across the sky
Through the creamy white clouds
I saw him enter, a man so charming
He offered her his hand
And my angel smiled in return
My world grew red
Blood of the setting suns
All roses soon turned dead
And I sulked in its stench
Into an ocean of sorrow I fell
Never wanting to stand again.
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Oh, all this innocence and dreaminess. Mostly ends up curtailed.
But come on. Think big. You know the regular advice, don't you? The 'she wasn't worth it' advice. Self-esteem. Saves.
I don't know why, but the writing seems a reflection of what you experienced personally. I'm hoping I'm wrong.
Good words.
superb......nice bro nice.....
Nice.....some poems will leave an implict feeling in heart..this looks like one..Great Work.keep going
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